MÌNH ĐÃ VIẾT GÌ ĐỂ ĐƯỢC 8.0 WRITING?

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Mình dành 40 – 50% thời gian để viết essay plan để định hình bài viết của mình, từ đó triển khai ý dễ dàng hơn, tiết kiệm được rất nhiều thời gian chỉnh sửa đi chỉnh sửa lại một ý nào đó trong bài viết.

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Dưới đây là bài sample cho 2 bước trên chủ đề ART & TECHNOLOGY.

With the development of technology and science, some people believe that there is no great value of artists such as musicians and painters.

What are the things artists can do but the scientist cannot? Why should we encourage the art area?

Essay Plan:

Introduction: refer to the task question, using paraphrasing. There are things artists can do but scientists cannot. Should be encouraged for the benefits and values it brings.

Body Paragraph #1: things artists can do but scientists cannot (1) artists are able to send meaningful messages through their artworks (2) artists are able to trigger sympathy and empathy in people. In contrast, these emotions and feelings cannot be conveyed through the works of technology and science

Body Paragraph #2: reasons why we should encourage the art area? (1) learning arts is a way of learning the culture and tradition of a nation -> pass on cultural values to the next generation through the teaching of arts (2) art allows people to see things from different perspectives -> boost our creativity and empathy -> train their intuition and empathy for each other -> harmonious society

Conclusion: both technology and science bring great value to our life, however, there are merits that only art can deliver and it should be widely promoted to everyone.

In the age of technological advancement, some people claim that artists such as musicians and painters are playing an insignificant role. However, there are some aspects that only artists can bring to life, thus, it is essential to promote arts to everyone.

There are definitely many things that artists can deliver better than scientists. To elaborate, artists such as musicians and painters are able to send meaningful messages through their artworks. For instance, Propaganda Art is an efficient means to raise people’s awareness of contemporary social issues such as the “We can do it” poster which has inspired women globally to be more active in deciding their role in society. Moreover, aestheticists and art-lovers can experience the emotions from those creations when contemplating a painting or listening to a song. This means that artists are able to trigger sympathy and empathy in people. In contrast, these emotions and feelings cannot be conveyed through the works of technology and science. Works of art provide unique moral and artistic values that only artists have the vocation to convey.

Since art brings many benefits to people, everyone should be encouraged to take part in it. Learning arts is a way of learning the culture and tradition of a nation. Therefore, we have to appreciate and pass on cultural values to the next generation through the teaching of arts. To be more particular, lacquer artists in Vietnam are holding many workshops and exhibitions for the young to have a good grasp of this long-standing traditional artform. As mentioned above, art allows people to see things from different perspectives which could boost people’s creativity and empathy as well. By doing arts, students can train their intuition and empathy for each other, which will create a better society where everyone lives harmoniously together.

In conclusion, both technology and science bring great value to our life, however, there are merits that only art can deliver and it should be widely promoted to everyone.